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The chart below gives information about the journeys to school by children aged between 5-10 in the UK in one year.
【主体段分段】：
-Body 1：up to 1 mile、1-2 miles
-Body 2：3-5 miles、5+miles
【开头段】
The bar chart illustrates how 5-to-10-year-old children in Britain commuted to school in a year.
【概述段】
Overall, the majority of studentspreferred towalk or cycle for journeys that were 2 miles or shorter, but buses and cars werethe most commonoptions among those who travelled longer distances.
思路要点：
- ≤2miles：walk和bicycle比例更高
- ≥3miles：car和bus比例更高
【Body 1】
In terms ofcommuting distance within a mile, roughly 89% of the surveyed students went to school on foot,almost 9 times the figure forcycling.By contrast, automobileswere less favoredfor this distance, accounting for only less than 2% of the total journeys.In the 1-2-mile range, walking was stillthe most popular option, as it was chosen by 73% of the students. The other three modes of transport were less common,with the figures ranging from 3% to 15%.
思路要点：
- up to 1 mile：walk数据最高，大约是bicycle的9倍，car和bus数据最小
- 1-2 miles：walk数据最高，其余三种方式区间在3% 到15%
【Body 2】
The reverse was true forlonger commuting distances.Regarding3-to-5-mile journeys, busestook the lead(60%),twice as large as the figure forcar journeys. Fewer than 10% of the students went to school by bike or on foot within such distance.Forjourneys over 5 miles, 78% of the students commuted to school by bus,followed bythe figure for cars(29%).However, no students commuted through walking if they lived over 5 miles from school.
思路要点：
- 3-5 mile：bus数据最高，是car的2倍，其余两种方式数据低于10%
- 5+ miles：bus最高，car第二，但没有人walk
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